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Chapter 10 - Grandma Wrote The Chilling Sentence

Marcus stared at Detective Bennett.

“No.”

“The handwriting comparison isn't absolute proof,” she said. “But it's strongly consistent.”

“With my mother?”

“Yes.”

Marcus felt betrayed all over again.

Evelyn sat in the living room when he confronted her.

She looked at the photocopy.

Then closed her eyes.

“I wrote it.”

Marcus couldn't speak.

Maya was at school.

Thank God.

“What does it mean?”

Evelyn looked exhausted.

“Not what you think.”

Marcus laughed bitterly.

“Everybody keeps saying that.”

“I wrote the address and time.”

“You knew Claire was taking Maya there.”

“Yes.”

“You wrote that Maya wouldn't be a problem anymore.”

Evelyn's eyes filled.

“I meant Claire's problem.”

“That doesn't make it better.”

“Listen to me.”

Marcus almost walked away.

Then he remembered Evelyn's failure at the party.

She had been manipulated too.

He sat.

“Talk.”

Evelyn explained that Claire had called her three days earlier.

Claire said she was struggling with Maya whenever Marcus traveled.

She wanted professional guidance.

Evelyn recommended family counseling.

Claire mentioned Rebecca Sloan.

Evelyn remembered the name from years ago.

Not from Thomas Walsh.

From Jenna.

Marcus stared.

“Mom?”

“Jenna once asked me whether I'd heard of Rebecca. I said no.”

“Why didn't you tell me?”

“Because I didn't remember until Claire said the name.”

Evelyn became suspicious.

She wrote the address on Maya's discarded wish card because it was the nearest piece of paper.

The sentence underneath was her private thought.

After tonight, Maya won't be a problem anymore.

She meant she planned to confront Claire after the party and insist Marcus be told everything.

“I was angry,” Evelyn said. “I thought Claire was treating Maya like the problem when the adults were failing her.”

Marcus rubbed his face.

“Why write it like that?”

“Because I wasn't writing a threat. I was writing to myself.”

The sentence that had looked monstrous had an ordinary explanation.

A careless one.

But ordinary.

Marcus felt almost dizzy.

“How did the card get under the tablecloth?”

“I lost it.”

That matched Denise finding it.

No mastermind had planted the message.

Again, the family had interpreted ambiguous evidence through fear.

Bennett listened to Evelyn's account.

Then asked about Jenna.

“Did Jenna ever discuss Ethan Grant with you?”

Evelyn shook her head.

“No.”

“Thomas Walsh?”

“No.”

Then she hesitated.

“There was a man at Jenna's funeral.”

Marcus looked up.

“What man?”

“I didn't know him.”

“What did he look like?”

Evelyn described him.

Mid-forties.

Tall.

Gray at the temples.

Scar near his left eyebrow.

Bennett showed her Ethan's driver's-license photograph.

Evelyn went pale.

“That's him.”

Marcus stared.

“Ethan was at Jenna's funeral?”

“Yes.”

“Why didn't you tell me?”

“I thought he worked with her.”

Marcus felt anger rising.

“How many things did everybody decide not to tell me?”

Evelyn accepted the question.

“Too many.”

Detective Bennett's phone rang.

She stepped outside.

When she returned, her expression had changed.

“Ethan's been found.”

Marcus stood.

“Where?”

“Maryland.”

“Is he alive?”

“Yes.”

“Did he confess?”

“No.”

Bennett paused.

“He says he's the one being framed.”

Marcus almost laughed.

“Of course.”

“He voluntarily walked into a police station.”

That silenced Marcus.

People fleeing investigations rarely surrendered without a reason.

“What does he say happened?”

“He says somebody used his company systems to create the forged records.”

“Who?”

Bennett looked directly at Marcus.

“He named Claire.”

Marcus's stomach tightened.

Then Bennett continued.

“But he also brought evidence that points somewhere else.”

“Where?”

“To Jenna.”

Marcus stared.

“My wife has been dead for three years.”

May you like

“I know.”

Ethan claimed the entire chain of events had started with something Jenna arranged before she died.

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